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[b]Some people think competitive sport is important for a child’s education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.[/b]Recently, whether children should be encourged to take competitive sports has been highly debatable. Some believe the advantages of competitive sports overweigh its disadvantages while others just hold the opposite viewpoint. This is an interesting topic worth discussing.
There is no denying that competitive sports have some positive effects on children. To begin with, it is benificial to children's health by taking part in such kind of sports. The more exrcises they do in sports, the more health they will keep. Furthermore, competitive sports cultivate children's creativity. They can probly acquire skills from those sports in order to beat their competitors. To make one final point, competitive sports bring children stimulating experience. For instance, children are likey to enjoy the feeling of winning in every goal of a football match.
In the meantime, however, competitive sports sometimes have some negative effects on children as well. For one thing, that kind of sports may destory children's awareness of cooperation. Winning is the only target of competitive sports and, therefore, children will reach the goal by all means including some selfish behaviors. Needless to say, they can hardly be good teamworkers when they grow up. For another, it must be noted that some competitive sports are very dangerous especially for children. Without adequate experience, they may easily get hurt in the sports such as football, basketball and iceball.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that children should be encourged to participate in some competitive sports occasionally in order to take advantage of the strenth and minimize the weakness.
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